What the "About" page for this group doesn't tell right away is that this program is for high school students. That's what we need to incorporate in our headline... It took far too long for me to find out who the "Fellows" are who participate in this program... They are students from a specific set of Philadelphia high schools.
I'm not certain yet what the headline ought to be. But here's a shot...
Preparing High School Youth for Civic Leadership
With this line, I would be able to tell at a glance what the program is about...
We can talk about how to think about making this kind of addition to the page... I would just do it. But, if you want to feel more comfortable, we can write to any group where we have something to say in a headline and ask if it's ok. In this case, I'll try to see if I can get a response. I'll cc you with my email to them.
I love the Video!!!!
Why did you delete my reply?! This is a DISCUSSION page. Nobody should be deleting anybody else's contributions. Nobody. If somebody doesn't like what somebody else writes, let them write a reply, NOT delete what the other person wrote. That should be a "community guideline" here, to borrow a phrase from Facebook. I have never deleted any discussion contribution here, other than one of mine maybe, and I never will. The worst I can IMAGINE doing, is saying, "Dude, maybe you'd like to delete that one."
You know I strongly oppose "editorial headlines". I absolutely hate 'em, with a passion. Please leave me out of it. Don't send me any copies of emails. I will never ask permission to do an "editorial headline", because I vehemently, stubbornly will not ever make one. Do with this page what you wish, as long as I don't have to look at it.