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What the About page for this group doesn't tell is that this program is for high school students. That's what we need to incorporate in our headline... It took far too long for me to find out who the "Fellows" are who participate in this program... They are students from a specific set of schools. | What the "About" page for this group doesn't tell right away is that this program is for high school students. That's what we need to incorporate in our headline... It took far too long for me to find out who the "Fellows" are who participate in this program... They are students from a specific set of Philadelphia high schools. | ||
I'm not certain yet what the headline ought to be. But here's a shot... | |||
'''Preparing High School Youth for Civic Leadership''' | |||
With this line, I would be able to tell at a glance what the program is about... | |||
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Paul,
What the "About" page for this group doesn't tell right away is that this program is for high school students. That's what we need to incorporate in our headline... It took far too long for me to find out who the "Fellows" are who participate in this program... They are students from a specific set of Philadelphia high schools.
I'm not certain yet what the headline ought to be. But here's a shot...
Preparing High School Youth for Civic Leadership
With this line, I would be able to tell at a glance what the program is about...